The Iron

The iron,
Before
It’s subjected
To its
Only
Routine
Is a proud
Object,
Stern,
Almost
Snobbish.
Nose turned
Up in the air,
Symmetrical
With
Purpose,
Rigid,
Confident,
Almost
Cocky.

Poetry.net

One Response to “The Iron”

  1. i like this. it’s got purpose and integtrity. you need a comma after iron in the first line and you need to sort out why its routine is a subjection but otherwise it’s good.
    ben

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