Amazing

You’re amazing,
Captivating,
You’re like the wheel,
An electric storm
Or milk chocolate on a Sunday,

Your smile
Invents new blood cells in me,
Your eyes are like caterpillars,
(In a good way –
They move magnificence),

The glow
Of your sweet honeyed skin
Slows down cars,
Makes buzzards hover
And the rain disappear,

The warmth of your touch
Is like butter on toast,
A feeling of ease,
A simple translation
Worth thousands of words.

You’re amazing,
New sensations
Come thick and fast when you whisper,
The softest of lullabies
Escaping from your lips,

Your doubts
Are not failings,
You’re a rainbow after thunder,
Puddles shining onyx blue,
A remedy from storms,

You’re arms
Are a rest from the present,
A retreat from the city,
A magnified moment
Where sadness disbands,

The truth is you’re amazing,
When I hold you
The world turns into sponge,
Birds simply give up and drop from the sky,
I need you in my life.

Poetry.net

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8 Responses to “Amazing”

  1. beautiful words..

    bless your day.

    A++

  2. I see the addiction, well written.

  3. that is so wow to hear that! sweet 🙂

  4. You paint a picture of love with common words.

  5. Wow, so many beautiful images hard to pick just one! Do love the butter on toast though!

  6. dunstancarter Says:

    Ah, thanks!

  7. best part You’re arms
    Are a rest from the present,
    Very nice

    my potluck post is here
    http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/04/11/poem-in-case-of-emergency/

  8. this is vast and gorgeous.

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