And The Band Were Called Free Spirit

Eyes aglow
With crack house

Alabaster skinned
With a fortunate

We’ve seen
All these moves

The curled lip,
The awkward
Indie flamingo pose,

And now we know


Piss wet
And splintered,

Has forgotten
The tree

2 Responses to “And The Band Were Called Free Spirit”

  1. Like your choice of words very much – “indie flamingo pose” and then later “piss wet/ and splintered”. The impact of some of the contrasts works beautifully.

  2. Thanks Holly – nice one for stopping by and commenting 🙂

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